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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

my window, you

are too small, too high

but you frame the stars

I hate the windows in our house. The stupid people who renovated the house put in these tiny windows that are half the size of all the other houses in our development. They drive me crazy. So it was a challenge to find the beauty. And yet I've been making it a project to look out my window whenever I pass to find something beautiful outside to contemplate. And today we were talking about apostrophe and Homer and apostrophizing inanimate objects. It felt right to address my window directly to give it a piece of my mind.

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Lorrie Tom's avatar

OH, frame the stars! Love that line. Isn’t it amazing how re-seeing things is hard to stop once you start? I love it.

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Stephanie's avatar

I LOVE how you turned your power lines into haiku and beauty.

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Debra O's avatar

Great Prompt. Thanks for new perspective!

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